① Content:

The following examples are rich in information and show a deep understanding of the topics. Your ideas are clear and your ability to cover various aspects of the subject matter is commendable!

（1）Depth and Insight: these responses show in-depth thinking and unique insights.

1. 孙祺开2403：Tang Dynasty poet He Zhizhang's "Willow" in the use of anthropomorphism: "Jasper makeup into a tree height, ten thousand down the green silk sash." I do not know who cut the thin leaves, the spring breeze in February is like scissors." Here, the poet compares the willow to a well-dressed beauty, while the spring breeze is personified as a skillful tailor, who cuts the thin willow leaves with scissors, making the image of the willow more vivid, and the gentle and strength of the spring breeze is also shown.

2. 柳雯晞：I think that anthropomorphism can be used to describe plants from many aspects, such as its appearance, that is, its appearance, or its growth process, such as when the pear blossoms bloom, we can say that the pear blossoms in the sky, like butterflies flying freely in the air, fluttering freely, dancing, making people unconsciously stop the footsteps of the road, to enjoy this beautiful scenery, they are blooming, dancing in the air, beautiful, and there is an ancient poem that also describes this beautiful scenery very well: suddenly like a night of spring breeze, thousands of trees and pear blossoms bloom.This ancient poem vividly learns that when the pear blossom blooms, the petals in the sky fly in the air, and the falling flowers are colorful.

3. 宋美霖：The most impressive exhibit I have ever met is the Three-color camel figurines of Tang Dynasty, which is settled in Shanxi History Museum. There are eight musicians sitting on a blanket and carried on the back of a camel. With beautiful colors and splendid craft, it almost makes me feel like being in the real situation . It shows not only the craftsman's fascinating aesthetic,but also Tang Dynasty's prosperous scene at that time.

（2）Relevance: these responses stay on topic and not deviate from the core of the discussion.

1. 孙潇然：The crane has a long graceful figure and white feathers and it has a very rich meaning and symbolic significance Chinese traditional culture,representing longevity, wealth, auspiciousness and other beautiful meanings, as well as purity, magic spiritual color. These meanings and symbols reflect the Chinese people's yearning and pursuit of a happy life and the inheritance and innovation of Chinese culture.

2. fzTNdW6L：The giant panda, scientifically known as Ailuropoda melanoleuca, is a bear native to high forests in Sichuan, Shaanxi, and Gansu, China. With its distinctive black and white fur, it symbolizes cuteness and peace. Cherished as China’s national treasure, the panda represents harmony, friendship, and happiness. It serves as a cultural ambassador, featuring prominently in international exchanges and conservation efforts. The panda’s image also embodies the Chinese ethos of tranquility and contentment, often depicted in art and festivals to convey joy and prosperity.

（3）Information Richness: these responses provide sufficient information, including facts, specific examples.

1. 白崇文：Foxy is one of the scool cats on GDUFS North campus.Long and brown fur all over his body,he is of extreme elegance that makes him special among so many cats.He has two round and twinkling eyes on his foxy face,which gave everyone a sense of mysterious,thus willing to have a close contact with him.Sitting right on the pedastrians,he always very graceful,with the end of his tails slightly wagging.However,just like his name,he is a bit timid.When witnessing his appearance,everyone will stop to admire his beauty.It's hard to believe stray cats will be so adorable,but it's actually happening.He brings people to those good times when people first met a cute cat and felt impressed by that cat's gorgeous look,which enables him to be one of the best-loved cats on the campus.Gradually,people want to join in the activities of taking care of stray cats,offering cat foods and giving them prompt medical care.Hence,our campus becomes better day by day,and it's a win-win situation!

2. 叶恺琳：When it comes to my university life,the cats in school must be second to none,which absolutely add luster to my campus life.There are many cats around our campus ranging from the documentary to the restaurant.It’s no exaggeration to say that our campus is a paradise for cats,and many students are cat-lovers so they will feed them to ensure their health.The most striking cat I have seen must be the one lying on the tree,with white and brown fur laid out randomly like the chocolate ice-cream on its body,it is lying on the tree comfortably as if it wasn’t in the campus but in the Hawaii.

② Structure:

The structure of these response is well-organized. The clear logic helps to guide the reader through your thought process.

（1）Paragraph Division: these responses logically divided into paragraphs, with each focusing on a single topic.

1. 刘栩彤：A few plum blossoms at the corner of the wall, blooming alone in the cold. From afar, one knows it's not snow because of the faint fragrance coming. The poet personifies the plum blossom. By depicting the image of plum blossoms blooming alone in the cold corner and emitting a delicate fragrance, the plum blossom is endowed with the qualities of tenacity and not being influenced by worldly trends.

The Tang Dynasty poet Han Yu said,“The dogwood flowers and catkins have no talent or skill, they can only scatter like snowflakes in the sky". This phrase probably means that even the beautiful color of Yang Hua and elm tree's leaf arenot willing to be lonely, dancing with the wind, into the sky flying snow.

2. 杨芊芊：Elephants are the largest land mammals on Earth, with their massive bodies and long, curved tusks that can reach up to 10 feet in length. They have large, expressive ears that can span up to 5 feet across, which they use for both temperature regulation and communication.

Emotionally, elephants are often seen as symbols of wisdom and strength. They are known for their deep family bonds and their ability to mourn their dead, showing a level of empathy that resonates with our own human experiences. There’s a tenderness in the way they touch each other with their trunks, a gentleness that speaks volumes about their capacity for love and compassion.

（2）Transition Smoothness: the transitions between paragraphs and sentences are natural and smooth.

1. 迟佳奕：Do you know the giant panda? It is the national treasure of our country! They have round heads, sharp teeth in their mouths, and their "black eye circles" are particularly eye-catching. Their short limbs, fat and big bodies are dressed in black-and-white fur coats, giving people a simple and honest feeling. His favorite snack is bamboo.

Giant pandas have a bad habit: they drink after eating and sleep after drinking, which may be the reason for their fat body. Every time they drink water, they climb to the pool, and then use their forepaws to put the water in their mouth. The water in their body is like wine, like a drunken person, staggering on the ground to sleep, and occasionally perform a set of "drunken boxing" before going to bed!

Do you know why giant pandas have the reputation of national treasure? That's because they are our "friendship bridge" between China and foreign countries. China is the only country with giant pandas. Pandas from other countries are all sent by China. Moreover, they are China's "living fossils" and one of the rare and endangered wild animals.

Our national treasure giant panda is wonderful!

③ Language:

In the following examples, it is obvious that the language skills are exceptional. The translations of Chinese poems are particularly remarkable and accurate, while the descriptions of other objects are vivid as well.

（1）Grammar Accuracy: the grammar in these response is rigorous and correct.

1. y3jER33K：The country is broken by mountains and rivers, and the city is deep in spring with deep vegetation.

When feeling emotions, flowers splash tears, hating birds that startle the heart.

The beacon lasted for three months, and the letter from home was worth ten thousand gold.

The white haired scratch is shorter, and the wild desire is stronger than the hairpin.

2. 赵萌萌：The slender beauty's dressed in emerald all about,

A thousand branches droop like fringes made of jade.

But do you know by whom these slim leaves are cut out?

The wind of early spring is sharp as scissor blade.

3. 薛怡琳：My parting grief is boundless when the sun sinks low,Eastward I point my whip and far away l'll go.

The fallen blossoms are not an unfeeling thing, Though turned to mud, they'd nurture flowers' growth next spring.

（2）Sentence Variety: these response use a variety of sentence structures, such as simple and complex sentences.

1. 李云翛：The giant panda is an iconic symbol of China and is one of the rarest and most beloved animals in the world. Known for its distinctive black and white fur, the giant panda is native to the mountainous regions of central China and is classified as a vulnerable species.

2. 刘弈瑶：Standing majestically on the campus is an old oak tree, its trunk is thick and sturdy, with rough bark that tells tales of years gone by. The branches spread out like open arms, reaching towards the sky as if yearning for something more.

3. 罗鑫淼：A cat with orange and white stripes is lying lazily under an old locust tree. The orange stripes seem like pigments carefully prepared by nature. Its tail swings gently, as if keeping the beat, enjoying this tranquility and harmony.

Its eyes are half-closed, revealing a lazy and contented expression.

（3）Vocabulary Richness: these responses use a rich vocabulary, making the sentences attractive and appealing.

1. idbBTADCTQ：In a secluded quadrant of the campus, there stands an ancient and dignified buttonwood tree, the robustness of whose trunk bespeaks its role as a silent testament to the passage of time, meticulously chronicling the metamorphoses of the campus landscape. During the vernal season, it dons a verdant mantle of new foliage, each leaf basking in the sun's embrace, reflecting the luminescence of vitality, akin to a stanza from nature's own poetry that imbues onlookers with a sense of life's effervescence and optimism. In the canine days of summer, it flourishes into a lush haven, offering a reprieve from the oppressing heat for the faculty and scholars, transforming into an oasis of tranquility. Beyond mere ornamental value, this tree serves as an emotional anchor, having borne witness to the maturation of innumerable students; their joys and sorrows are inextricably linked to its presence, instilling a sense of warmth and camaraderie as the years unfold.

2. ftrftdHx：In the lush green campus of Dalian Foreign Studies University, there is a striking tree that seems to be a guardian of peace and tranquility, standing at the end of the bluestone path next to the library. This tree has a thick trunk and is covered with dark brown scaly bark, which records the vicissitudes of wind and rain. Its lush branches and leaves are like a huge green umbrella, shielding the scorching summer sun and providing a cool resting place for passing students. Whenever a gentle breeze blows, the locust tree sways gently, making a rustling sound as if whispering, telling the stories of past students with a touch of nostalgia and tenderness. In spring, it is covered with white flowers, and the air is filled with a faint sweet fragrance, attracting bees and butterflies to dance gracefully, adding a touch of vitality and romance to the campus. In autumn, golden leaves fall with the wind, covering the ground. Walking on them, every step makes a gentle sound of seasonal changes, making people involuntarily slow down and feel this tranquility and beauty.

3. On our campus, a sturdy oak stands proud, its gnarled branches stretching wide, offering shade and solace.Students gather beneath, sharing laughter and dreams.Nearby, a calico cat weaves between legs, her soft purrs and gentle nudges weaving warmth into hearts, embodying comfort in the chaos of school life.

4. anfjYyBy：On our campus,there stands a wealth of trees.Its trunk is thick and sturdy,like a pillar holding up the sky .The bark is rough,a pattern that tells tales of years gone by and the harsh elements it has endured.Its branches spread out wide,as if reaching out to embrace the entire campus.

5. 那一秒：In my school,the persimmon was planted near our dormitory. This tree is native to East Asia and is widely cultivated for its sweet and nurtitious fruit,known as the persimmon.The tree can grow up to 20 meters in height.The leaves are simple,alternate,and oval to oblong in shape,with a smooth ,shiny surface.In the fall,these leaves turn a vibrant yellow before dropping off, allowing the bright orange fruits to take center stage.I believed that it is a valuable source of delicious and nurtritious fruit.

6. 杨嘻嘻：Beneath the library window stands a majestic oak, its gnarled branches stretching skyward like a wise elder's outstretched arms. Its leaves, a tapestry of gold and green, whisper stories of seasons past. Students often pause to rest beneath its shade, feeling a sense of comfort and inspiration. It's not just a tree; it's a guardian of our campus, a silent witness to our growth and dreams.

7. zusjdu：The cat I met near the lake was so lovely. As a stray cat, it didn't mind being touched by people.When I approached the black,white and yellow cat,instead of being afraid or running away,it made cute meows.So I took a lot of pictures and touched the cat gently.When it purred softly, it brought a sense of calm. I think it was a companion that added warmth and happiness to our study life.

8. 江朋阳：The campus scenery in autumn is always particularly beautiful. The ginkgo leaves on the roadside are beginning to yellow and fall gently when the breeze blows. A golden carpet was spread at the foot. The sun shines through the leaves on my face, warm and soft. This time of year always makes me feel that everything is so fresh and full of hope.

9. 谢文茜：I often encounter school cats on my way to the teaching building or student dormitory,and taking photo for them is one of my hobbies.This one was met around the dining hall.It has a tiny but delicate face,which is so adorable.It's blonde eyes was glittering in the sunlight,just like an amber worked with great care.White and orange have been perfectly combined on it.When I met it,it was groveling,shaking its butt and tail,preparing to hunt.But when it rushed out,there weren't anything.What amuses me most is that it seemed overwhelmed and confused as well as we humans when it failed.That really was an amusing and funny scene.